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13 July 2009 @ 11:59 pm
Numb3rs Fic: On the Sand  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #220 – Sand


Title: On the Sand
Pairing/Characters: Billy/Charlie
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Man Hunt
Summary: Billy and Charlie finally truly alone on a private beach
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


Grains of sand speckle dark curls, a night sky juxtaposed against the flame of Billy's sun red-gold hair.

They are day and night and no one understands, save his genius, but Billy doesn't care. He is a simple man; he wants only sun, sand and his lover beneath him. His name is a breath on Charlie's lips as their bodies, like vines, entwine.

Charlie's skin is olive beneath his freckled hand, salty beneath his tongue and trembling like the rumble of the crashing waves.

Numbers, like the surf, recede. A blissful cry rises like a seagull to the sky.

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 14th, 2009 09:17 am (UTC)
Confession
Once again, inspired by Taking in the Sights and perhaps a little by my brain thinking about Safe Harbor's in progress sequel Harbor House. (Now that Billy's in SoCal... Well, it gives me ideas. /big grin/) Oh, and Clean Slate because that's the one with the bit about Billy's freckles being a constellation. I think that's what my muse was thinking about when she decide to recast pale sand dusted in Charlie's hair as stars in the night sky.

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
devon99 on July 14th, 2009 01:03 pm (UTC)
Beautiful my dear.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 14th, 2009 06:49 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I still prefer the original, but this one has a few bits that I rather enjoyed.
t_vo0810t_vo0810 on July 14th, 2009 03:21 pm (UTC)
I simply adore the way you write Billy/Charlie. It's just amazing. Great job yet again. Am looking for to the Billy pov piece Safe Harbor. May have to go reread all your Billy/Charlie again cause this piece put me in the mood! And I need something to do while I await Virtue with abated breath. :)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 14th, 2009 06:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks, hon!

I need to get back into writing Harbor House. Not sure what's holding that up - other than the 3 big bangs I've got looming over me and the megaepic Virtue. LOL

I adore this pairing and wish others would write it more but at least I enjoy writing it myself enough to keep coming back to it.

I'm off to go prep today's Virtue post. Yay!
ladygray99ladygray99 on July 14th, 2009 06:42 pm (UTC)
I read this and had an urge to purr.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 14th, 2009 06:55 pm (UTC)
Hee!

Go with it. ;-)
Karen: n3rs_charliebyrons_brain on July 14th, 2009 06:57 pm (UTC)
Lovely...
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 14th, 2009 07:01 pm (UTC)
Thank you, my dear!

/shares iced pumpkin scones with you/
melissima: Agent Cooper <lj user=red-tanger>melissima on July 15th, 2009 02:12 am (UTC)
*drools* This is beautiful. I love when you write Billy/Charlie, and I'm sure that image of Billy's coppery hair against the night sky will be with me for a long time. Gorgeous.
sky_blue2sky_blue2 on July 17th, 2009 03:42 am (UTC)
Just makes you want to do a happy **SIGH** Love the last line.
:)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 17th, 2009 04:15 am (UTC)
Yay!

I still like the original better, but this one's quite happy-making as well. :-)

Thanks!
Tori Lovelostandalone22 on July 18th, 2009 06:12 pm (UTC)
I really like this.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on July 18th, 2009 07:17 pm (UTC)
Thanks!

I like the original better, but I still like this one too.
rubynye: Origami (by zeldaophelia)rubynye on July 19th, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
Mmm, Billy/Charlie is so tasty, and you beautifully capture the contrasts that make them so, like hot fudge and cold icecream. Yum.