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08 November 2009 @ 03:43 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Water Versus Colby  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #236 – Current


Title: Water Versus Colby
Pairing/Characters: Charlie/Colby
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Judgment Call
Summary: How can anyone resist wet Colby?
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


"You're staring at the water again."

"Huh?" Charlie looked up to find Colby wearing his bemused face, the one that meant Charlie had been off doing something a little too absentminded professor again. "Oh, the water! Yeah, I was noticing the patterns the hot tub jets form, the currents they make aren't symmetrical, so…"

"If all you're interested in is the water in this hot tub then I'm clearly not doing my job right," Colby drawled, raising an eyebrow, sarcasm clear in his tone.

Charlie's expression shifted to an impish grin. "Need some pointers, junior?" he teased.

"Again," Colby intoned, mocking offense as he rolled his eyes, "not that much younger than you." He shifted to hover before Charlie in the swirling waters. "But I do think you need some distraction…"

Charlie jumped slightly as he felt Colby's unseen hands find his knees under the churning of the jets. His body flushed with interest as he felt them skate enticingly up his thighs, tensing as those talented fingers reached their destination.

Having obtained his full and complete attention, Colby slid between his legs, kneeling in the shallow water. Moving in close, Colby buried a hand in the hair at the back of his head as the other hand continued to tempt and tease under the water. Bringing his mouth to Charlie's he kissed him, rough and dirty, overwhelming him instantly.

Charlie's hands gravitated to Colby's ass, encouraging him closer, enjoying the feel of the taut roundness filling his hands. His mind emptied of everything save thoughts of the delicious hard body before him, envisioning all the ways Colby could take him right there.

"Now, isn't this better than water?" Colby murmured between kisses as he let Charlie up for air.

Charlie gasped into his mouth, hungry for more. "What water?"

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on November 8th, 2009 11:45 pm (UTC)
Confession
It's the return of the PG13 porn fic! LOL

I confess the first version of this had Charlie as the aggressor, but I couldn't make it work. /sigh/ I just don't get Charlie/Colby so it's so hard to porn them. Hopefully I get brownie points with the ChaCo girls for keeping trying.

Very special thanks to beta melissima and to swingandswirl for their assistance with this fic.

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
ladygray99: Colbyladygray99 on November 8th, 2009 11:49 pm (UTC)
\o/ Well now this just made my morning. Charlie/Colby hot tub and you writing. :)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 8th, 2009 11:50 pm (UTC)
HEE! Thanks. Most of the credit goes to Tam for helping me fix the broken first draft though. :-)
Dani: Charby watching youumbralillium on November 9th, 2009 12:11 am (UTC)
You definitely got brownie points from me! *fans self*
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 12:22 am (UTC)
Yay! I'm glad it worked. (And yay Breaking Point iconnage!)
Mia: colbymia_dcwut_09 on November 9th, 2009 12:57 am (UTC)
lol go to love colby and his ways of distracting charlie
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 01:02 am (UTC)
It's hard not to enjoy the ever so distractable Charlie. ;-)
Mia: charlie_2mia_dcwut_09 on November 9th, 2009 01:04 am (UTC)
sure is
lillyglillyg on November 9th, 2009 04:32 pm (UTC)
Very yummy! ^^
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 08:52 pm (UTC)
Hee! Few can resist the Wet!Colby!
lillyglillyg on November 9th, 2009 08:53 pm (UTC)
Well, I can't! And I assume! :p
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsession: charlie/colbypenguingal on November 9th, 2009 04:53 pm (UTC)
*YUM*
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 08:52 pm (UTC)
Thanks! (Yay icon!)
t_vo0810: Imp Charliet_vo0810 on November 9th, 2009 05:37 pm (UTC)
/smacks lips/ a very tasty nibblet of porny goodness, my friend. I very much enjoyed and wished i had my own hottub and wet!Charlie to distract. Or wet!Colby. Or just directing ced wet!ChaCo to do not so PG 13 things......mmmmmmm. yum.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 08:54 pm (UTC)
We may need to install a hot tub in the Garage so we can enjoy putting clones in it to watch. Hehehe

/♥s you and your brill ideas and your fun comments/
Karen: n3rs_colbybyrons_brain on November 9th, 2009 07:24 pm (UTC)
*guh* what a picture! great story hun...
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 08:55 pm (UTC)
Pretty, huh?

Thanks, hon!
devon99 on November 9th, 2009 07:55 pm (UTC)
Resistance is futile Charlie:)

Fab stuff sweetie:)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 9th, 2009 08:55 pm (UTC)
HEE!

Thanks, hon! Glad you liked it!
Tamanna: Colby smileswingandswirl on November 17th, 2009 02:29 am (UTC)
*grins* Just as good on second read. Brava, hon!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 17th, 2009 03:09 am (UTC)
Thank you for helping me fix it!