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09 August 2010 @ 02:23 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Girls' Night Out  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #275 – Blush


Title: Girls' Night Out
Pairing/Characters: Amita/Susan
Rating: R
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: All's Fair
Summary: Susan promises Amita a memorable night on the town in London
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


They almost ran over two other women as they stumbled from the pub, Amita weaving in her heels yet somehow still remaining upright despite how wonderfully tipsy she was.

"That was so much fun!" she slurred, hand almost hitting a streetlight pole in her gestural enthusiasm.

Susan smirked, looked well and truly pleased with herself.

"Well, I did promise a truly memorable night on the town."

"I might not remember it tomorrow..." Amita wagged her finger as she spoke, but soon got distracted by it. "Oh, yeah. I might totally forget all this, but for tonight it's totally epic, I mean memorable. You know what I mean."

Susan brushed back the long hair from Amita's shoulder.

"Yes I do, love."

She leaned in close, breathing hot up from the base of Amita's neck to just behind her ear, hovering there just long enough to get Amita's heart racing before she pulled back.

Amita caught the expression on a woman passing by who'd seen them and realized the woman was blushing because of what Susan just did or what she thought Susan did.

Her forehead creased, caught between being turned on and knowing she wasn't supposed to be.

"What about Charlie?" she asked.

Susan backed her up against an old brick wall, pressing her full breasts up against Amita's as her hands sought out the soft skin at her waist just beneath the hem of her shirt.

The contact was intoxicating: Susan's perfume, the scent of sex, swirling her head more than the alcohol.

"Yes..." Susan's lips were close enough to Amita's to brush as she spoke. One hand worked its way around to cup Amita's ass as the other moved up underneath her shirt. A gasp escaped Amita as it teasingly skimmed the lace of her bra. "What about Charlie?"

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rubynye: Oglerubynye on August 10th, 2010 02:05 am (UTC)
Charlie who? *cackles in glee* Oh, what a pretty image this is.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on August 10th, 2010 02:10 am (UTC)
Hehehe Exactly. Trust my fic Susans to always be enjoyably oversexed. ;-)
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsessionpenguingal on August 10th, 2010 02:44 am (UTC)
GUH.

Yeah. I think that about sums it up.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on August 10th, 2010 02:58 am (UTC)
300 words distilled into 3 letters: yes, that sums it up perfectly. ♥
Candi: Amita Among Petalsmustangcandi on August 10th, 2010 12:00 pm (UTC)
Very... VERY nice. Don't suppose this will be a series will it?? ;p

I was excited to see Amita/Susan as this month's pairing. Totally works. I'm waiting for the Charlie/Amita/Susan fic to happen. LOL. :)

Edited to use the correct icon. *head desk*

Edited at 2010-08-10 12:01 pm (UTC)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on August 10th, 2010 09:14 pm (UTC)
Thanks, hon.

I'm tempted, really tempted. I've played around with Charlie/Susan/third party a bit (and definitely done Charlie/Amita/third party), but Charlie/Susan/Amita would really be tasty good fun. (Thus me using my modly powers to encourage it at N100.)

Maybe I'll get lucky and rubynye will write it! Yum!
ladygray99ladygray99 on August 10th, 2010 12:06 pm (UTC)
Charlie, who is this Charlie person? :-)
So nice and dirty.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on August 10th, 2010 09:16 pm (UTC)
Hee! Oh, he would be so put out knowing he was forgotten. LOL

I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)
t_vo0810: Imp Charliet_vo0810 on August 10th, 2010 03:43 pm (UTC)
I second all of these comments. Just simply GORGEOUS! I love all the heightened anticipation. GUUUUUUUUH
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on August 10th, 2010 09:16 pm (UTC)
Yay! I'm glad you liked this one. I wanted us all to enjoy that visual. Yum.