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03 July 2011 @ 12:25 am
White Collar Fic: Still Life with Wife  
Written for whitecollar100 Challenge #052 – Shave


Title: Still Life with Wife
Pairing/Characters: Peter/Elizabeth/Neal
Rating: R
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: None
Summary: It's killing Peter to not be able to do more than watch them together
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


He promised only to watch, but Peter's hands clench and unclench at his sides as he barely keeps himself in the chair - watching. Neal's an expert, he knew that going in, but he also knew he had nothing to fear. Elizabeth is his and nothing can change that. Only now watching Neal slowly peel Elizabeth out of her dress and fancy lingerie he's dying inside at not being able to join in. Each flick of Neal's tongue on her soft pink nipples, he can taste. Each tremor under her skin as he flicks his fingertip against her clit, reverberates in him. A part of him even imagines he can feel the stubble on Neal's cheek bristling seductively against Elizabeth's freshly shaved calf. By the time he slides inside, filling her, the gasp that escapes her makes Peter hold his breath. It's beautiful to watch her: flushed, aroused, so sensual... He loves her even more for doing this, for letting him see her so open and wanton. When Neal finally brings her to climax Peter goes shock still: watching her in the throes from a distance so much more amazing than he imagined. And then two sets of still hungry eyes descend on him and his body experiences a rush of adrenaline. They both want him - at the same time. Elizabeth peels herself off the bed and saunters towards him with a womanly walk that makes him weak in the knees. Neal follows, looking too much like a tiger ready for his next meal. Elizabeth holds out her hand to him in invitation and while he's not actually bound it takes a second to mentally release himself after so much enforced stillness. Peter's gaze goes from his wife to his partner and back. And then he takes her hand.

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 3rd, 2011 07:25 am (UTC)
Confession
Title clearly inspired by this semester's Art History class. ;-)

I wrote this during the most recent slashchat and WC100 comm mod ladygray99 pretty much made me promise to post it at her comm. A few extra sentences to bump it up to 300 words and a reference to shaving included and here we are: done!

I confess that I'm amused by the fact that there are no carriage returns (old school lingo for blank lines) in this fic when my regular stories are rife with them. I blame the fact that that's how I post fic in the chat room (so it's easier to follow and not broken up). I just couldn't bring myself to put the empty lines in it once I started revising. /grins/

Congrats to whitecollar100 on reaching their 52nd prompt/1 year anniversary milestone! It's been a real pleasure to have my new fandom of choice have a fantastic drabble comm run by people I really like. To Elr and LG! /ovation/

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
SamuelJames: White Collar-Neal Caffreysamueljames on July 3rd, 2011 10:40 am (UTC)
Very hot. Loved your descriptions and how Peter felt watching them.
rubynye: Minoan Ladyrubynye on July 3rd, 2011 12:15 pm (UTC)
Oh my word eeee!
dynamite with a laser beam: White Collar Diana51stcenturyfox on July 3rd, 2011 12:24 pm (UTC)
Hotty-hot-hot.

This is great!
Keylaneverbelonged on July 4th, 2011 12:01 am (UTC)
This. I'm.
Really.
Speechless.
ladygray99: WC100ladygray99 on July 4th, 2011 01:35 am (UTC)
Thank you SOOOOOOOOOOOO much for posting this. It's hot and wonderful and I love it from Peter's POV

And thank you SO SO So much for the love and for sticking with the com so faithfully for a whole year.

:D
Cearesceares on July 18th, 2011 08:25 am (UTC)
I love the idea of this--considering Peter's voyeur/stalker tendencies I think they would all enjoy this game very much.