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17 February 2014 @ 10:13 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Temptation  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #459 - Mouth


Title: Temptation
Pairing/Characters: Don/Amita, Charlie
Rating: R
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: She tries to protest but words fail her
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


It's messy, raw, needy, wild... The air is forced out of him in grunts with each feral thrust, expelled from her in helpless gasps. Red-stained lips drag over his collarbone, marking him. His clutching fingerprints brand her flank. Words want to form yet mouths fail to obey and brains blot out all save the electric dance of dopamine pleasure.

We shouldn't...

His fist in her hair, taut. Sharp teeth grazing, biting. A fit so right, so tight... Perfectly pinned, deliciously helpless. Shuddering, she falls from grace.

Later Amita's mouth will work perfectly when she lies to Charlie about working late.

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 18th, 2014 06:15 am (UTC)
Confession
I confess to being amused by the fact that the artist whose song I was just inspired by in my last fic (for Mel's birthday tale Just My Imagination) managed to inspire this one as well: The Temptations.

Thank you,

Emma DeMarais
melissima: Evil by <lj user=melissima>melissima on February 18th, 2014 06:26 am (UTC)
Oooh it's dirty...and I like it.

brains blot out all save the electric dance of dopamine pleasure.

That is a such beautiful phrasing, I reacted out loud. I couldn't help it.

His fist in her hair, taut. Sharp teeth grazing, biting. A fit so right, so tight... Perfectly pinned, deliciously helpless. Shuddering, she falls from grace.

/sigh/ This is so beautiful that I can't help hoping there's a very guilty and hoplessly turned-on Charlie hiding and watching and not really minding at all. /applauds/

Candi: Amita Among Petalsmustangcandi on February 23rd, 2014 03:08 am (UTC)
I would like to second everything that Mel says here... because that's what I was going to say... especially the "Oooh, it's dirty... and I like it." That. Very, very much that.

:)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 23rd, 2014 08:17 pm (UTC)
/beams/

Thank you so much!

It's so nice to be naughty. Hehehe
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