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08 September 2007 @ 11:53 am
Numb3rs Fic: Obedience  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #123 – Professor


Title: Obedience
Pairing/Characters: Charlie/Withheld
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: The professor decides to teach his lover obedience
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


"Charlie..."

"When you speak, you will refer to me as Professor and Professor only and you will only speak when I give you permission to do so. You will obey me without question and without hesitation."

The chains rattled over his lover's head as he tugged at the handcuffs binding him to Charlie's will.

Black leather gloved fingers trailed over sweat slicked skin and taut muscles, leaving a shiver in their wake.

"I'm in control now. Do you understand?"

"Yes, Professor."

The sharp snap of a riding crop split the air.

"I don't recall giving you permission to speak, Ian..."

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 8th, 2007 06:55 pm (UTC)
Confession
Surprise! Hehehe

Only 1trackmind should be totally unsurprised by this. I had written her a Charlie/Ian microfiction ages ago that I ran across the other day and decided would make a good nucleus for a Professor prompt fic.

Amazingly I had a hard time making it 100 words - from *less*! I seriously liked the original microfiction and had a hard time *padding* it to reach 100! LOL Quite the unusual dilemma. Hehehe

I know this fic should be called Obedience School, but I was afraid that was too humorous and would take away from the stark BDSM tinged tone to this fic. Just know that the pun was in my head and I did not succumb to its siren call. /grins/

How's this for a good Distraction? /winks at my lovely slashwife/

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
melissimamelissima on September 9th, 2007 12:42 am (UTC)
Re: Confession
*shivers*

Ooh. Awesomeness. I like it when Professor Eppes is bossy. Yum.


\0/ Yay for distractions. :)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:40 am (UTC)
Re: Confession
/refrains from not so obligatory Charles in Charge joke/
/adjusts bustier/
/caresses whip/
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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:10 pm (UTC)
Re: Confession
Thank you! I aim to shock please! ;-)
perhaps some frottage is in order: Numb3rs secretssororcula on September 8th, 2007 07:01 pm (UTC)
Wow, I wish you'd seen my eyes widen on the last line. O.O Hee!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 8th, 2007 07:04 pm (UTC)
/dusts hands off/

My job here is done. Hehehe
fredbassettfredbassett on September 8th, 2007 08:07 pm (UTC)
OMFG ! Charlie/Ian bondage ? *dies*
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 8th, 2007 08:10 pm (UTC)
/evil grin/

Does this mean you've seen Sniper Zero?
fredbassettfredbassett on September 8th, 2007 08:27 pm (UTC)
It certainly does!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 8th, 2007 08:33 pm (UTC)
Yay!

LDP comes back to the show like twice a year now. His Edgerton rocks!
NV: [n3] edgerton // gun!pornneur0vanity on September 8th, 2007 09:13 pm (UTC)
Wow, that's definitely a surprise! Such a sexy visual!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:44 am (UTC)
Thanks! Ian doesn't win least likely, but he certainly wouldn't have been at the top of anyone's guess list!
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsession: holstered ianpenguingal on September 8th, 2007 10:16 pm (UTC)
Nnnngh, god yes.
gyen_gaoltosing: SEX: Drunk in the Grassgyen_gaoltosing on September 8th, 2007 10:42 pm (UTC)
Christ!! What an icon. *drools*
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:42 am (UTC)
I know! It's making me want to write Psych fic for that character!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:45 am (UTC)
All thanks go to your darling slashwife for helping generate the bunny for this. Clearly she has good taste. :-)
gyen_gaoltosing: EMO: In Chargegyen_gaoltosing on September 8th, 2007 10:41 pm (UTC)
Hee! That's kinkeh. :D And I can totally see Ian being a submissive (secretly, of course).
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:47 am (UTC)
Yes! Secretly as in penalty of death and he *means* it secret!

I can see him wanting to let go every once in a blue moon, but it blows my mind to imagine docile little Charlie in leather and in control.
Nicelyobsessed: CharlieIan the clubnicelyobsessed on September 9th, 2007 04:37 pm (UTC)
*iz dead*
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 05:15 pm (UTC)
I deded cookie! Noooo!

/revives/
/shivers at your icon/
/considers deding herself/
Nicelyobsessed: Charlie don't watchnicelyobsessed on September 9th, 2007 06:58 pm (UTC)
Dom Charlie *dies* again *g*

I'm proud of my icon^^ may I?
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on September 9th, 2007 07:02 pm (UTC)
The world needs more Dom!Charlie.

And leather. Lots of leather. Hehehe

You should be proud! It's brill!

(I'm sorry, may you what?)
Nicelyobsessed: charlie facepalmsnicelyobsessed on September 23rd, 2007 12:12 pm (UTC)
I forget to erased "may I" lol
rubynye: Tilly (Hyel)rubynye on October 8th, 2008 01:49 am (UTC)
Whooohoo! Ooh, this is hot!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 8th, 2008 01:52 am (UTC)
Hehehe This one is great for the role reversal. It always seems to be Dom!Ian Bound!Sub!Charlie. Someone had to flip them at some point and I of course volunteered. Hehehe