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28 November 2007 @ 04:41 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Guilty as Charged  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #135 – Guilty


Title: Guilty as Charged
Series/Universe: Character Witness
Pairing/Characters: Don/Howard
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Seasons 1, 2 and 3
Summary: Howard learns that Don's reputation as a lover is well earned
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


Slow delicious torture.

Don had brought Howard to the edge a half dozen times, cock brushing against his prostate as his hand - wrapped in Howard's silk tie - stroked his cock. Whenever he'd teetered on the brink Don had pulled him back then started over, each time driving him to new heights beyond what he thought possible. His body vibrated with ecstasy, so sensitive even the slide of slippery silk against his skin was almost too intense.

"Please..." A broken moan fell from Howard's lips. "You're killing me."

"Just call me Killer," Don purred teasingly. His breath was hot on the back of Howard's neck and his teeth grazed over heated skin, threatening to bite.

"I need..." Howard pleaded, cutting himself off when he heard the whine in his voice.

"Your motion is denied," Don taunted. "But I think you'll approve of this motion."

With a subtle shift, Don's next thrust sent a jolt through Howard - every nerve ending suddenly ablaze with pleasure as an inferno flared deep inside him. Don rolled his hips in time with his hand, unerringly hitting the sweet spot as his efforts escalated.

Howard opened his mouth, but all that came out was a strangled sound. The tension rose in him until his body abruptly went rigid and exploded all at once - a prostate orgasm hitting him with the force of a major earthquake just as his cock pulsed in Don's hand, ruining his good silk tie. His vision grayed out as he spasmed, rocked by Don's continued dual assault until he sagged helpless, twitching with aftershocks as Don finally fell still to let him recover.

"God, you're every bit as good as they said you'd be," he gasped.

He heard and felt the breathy chuckle behind him.

"Guilty as charged, Counselor..."

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on November 29th, 2007 12:43 am (UTC)
Confession
The moment of porn truth!

Howard finally gets to find out what all the fuss is about - to see if Don's as good a lover as the female AUSAs say he is. /grins/

(I mean of course he is, but the burden of proof was on Don.) /snicker/

I confess I threw away a first draft of this fic. I so wanted to make it clear they were on their sides back to front it read more like an assembly manual than sex. Ick. So I pulled the few good parts I had (about 50 words or so) and built a new fic instead. I decided readers enjoying the fic was more important than them knowing if Howard was on his side or his stomach.

I'm still not thrilled with the outcome, but generally speaking (save Clean Slate) I rarely find my own porn hot so I'm not a good judge of how well my sex scenes will go over. (Does that mean I need a porn only beta? Someone to give me a hotness reading on my sex scenes so I know if they're going cold or going gangbusters? Hehehe)

I peppered the fic with legal terms to continue the pun: motion, pleading and - with a nod to how Don addressed Robin in canon - Counselor. Hee!

FWIW, I am tempted to continue this series for one or two more installments, but I make no promises.

As usual, I'm not the one in charge of these things. Speak to my lawyer muse. ;-)

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
melissimamelissima on November 29th, 2007 01:43 am (UTC)
Re: Confession
Does that mean I need a porn only beta?

*pouts* I thought I was your porn beta! I distinctly recall at least one thudding. :)

<3 Lovely as always. *sends chocolate to the porn fairy*
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on November 29th, 2007 01:47 am (UTC)
Re: Confession
Hon, you are my *everything* beta! My *slashwife*! /clings/

Sure a few of my betas do gage my porn levels for me, but never hurts to have an unbiased specialist handy. ;-)

LOL How funny would that be though? "Hi, I'd like to apply for the open position of Porn Beta?" /snicker/
ladygray99ladygray99 on November 29th, 2007 02:00 am (UTC)
Re: Confession
That was the hottest 300 words I've read in a long time. Don does have a huge ego though :-)
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsession: sexy donpenguingal on November 29th, 2007 01:38 am (UTC)
*nnngh*

Holy... *fans self*

*throws muse porn cookies*
melissima: Evil by <lj user=melissima>melissima on November 29th, 2007 01:45 am (UTC)
GMTA, Hot Stuff. :)
irena_adler: Don flirtirena_adler on November 29th, 2007 01:45 am (UTC)
LOL, Howard, Don's ego does not need feeding! *g*
DarkEly: Lickelysium1996 on November 29th, 2007 02:32 am (UTC)
oh h0t ending. nice
cpwatcher on November 29th, 2007 07:07 am (UTC)
Wow! This was yummy! And your porn is always delicious. I hope to see this case continued. :)
telperion_15: Agent Dontelperion_15 on November 29th, 2007 07:18 pm (UTC)
*thud*

Guh

*and thud again*
rubynye: Don (by weirdkid624)rubynye on October 7th, 2008 06:38 pm (UTC)
The silk tie KILLED me!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 7th, 2008 07:14 pm (UTC)
Hee! I loved that detail. I figured somebody out there had to have a little kink for that and if not I might make some. ;-)