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03 February 2006 @ 12:02 am
Supernatural Fic: Retaliation  
Written for supernatural100 Challenge #14 - Candy


Title: Retaliation
Pairing/Characters: Dean, Sam
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: Sam plays a prank on a sleeping Dean
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


Dean woke coughing and sputtering, his mouth filled with tiny exploding candies.

"What the fuck?"

He looked up and saw Sam smirking with a Pop Rocks packet in his hand.

"Dude! Do you have some sort of death wish?" Dean stumbled to the bathroom to rinse his mouth out.

"No, but I do have your car keys! I'm going to go put gas in the car so we can go get some breakfast."

"No way you're taking the Impala after pulling this shit. Give me the damn keys!"

Dean lunged but Sam was out the door in a flash.

"Bitch..."

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 3rd, 2006 08:05 am (UTC)
Author Notes
Very special thanks to beta melissima for her assistance with this fic.

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
melissimamelissima on February 3rd, 2006 02:16 pm (UTC)
Re: Author Notes
I love this one, Emma. You do a very good job of capturing the Winchesters!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 4th, 2006 12:15 am (UTC)
Re: Author Notes
I'm trying! I'm learning their voices with each episode I see...

Thanks,

Emma
Walking Liability: Dean Blue Shadowsasemic on February 3rd, 2006 02:31 pm (UTC)
Love the ending line. Because that's like Dean's default insult.

Way cool.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 4th, 2006 05:02 am (UTC)
Thank melissima. I hadn't seen enough episodes when I first wrote this so she clued me in that Bitch was canon of all things! Ha! That's great!

Thanks,

Emma
Karen: Supernaturalbyrons_brain on February 3rd, 2006 09:20 pm (UTC)
Heheheehehehe, kiss chase!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 4th, 2006 05:02 am (UTC)
Well, what happens next *is* up to the individual reader. ;-)
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Gen: icon by Tinamishihalfshellvenus on February 5th, 2006 06:29 am (UTC)
Oh, it's nice to have some company over here again.

And Pop Rocks... possibly the most sneaky evil candy torture ever for someone who's sleeping. :-D
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 6th, 2006 12:23 am (UTC)
Hi and thanks. I was kind of wondering what was up in the SN fandom. I thought it seemed pretty well populated and active compared to Numb3rs, but so far I feel like I'm posting my SN fic in a vacuum. I mean, do I have to be better known to get attention or is it just that this fandom isn't into shorter fic? (The flashfic comm looks dead and that's not a good sign.)

I am glad there are a few folks keeping the drabbles going. I like the format and the challenge. Hopefully more will join in over time...

And Pop Rocks... possibly the most sneaky evil candy torture ever for someone who's sleeping.

Well, I didn't get the nickname Evil!Emma for nothing... ;-)

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
The Coalition For Disturbing Metaphors: Sam & Dean Gen: icon by Tinamishihalfshellvenus on February 6th, 2006 03:14 am (UTC)
Hi and thanks. I was kind of wondering what was up in the SN fandom. I thought it seemed pretty well populated and active compared to Numb3rs, but so far I feel like I'm posting my SN fic in a vacuum. I mean, do I have to be better known to get attention or is it just that this fandom isn't into shorter fic?

It's mysterious at times. Some of our writers are consistently oustanding, but they rarely comment on the works of us lesser mortals.

Drabbles are less appreciated than the longer works in most fandoms, I think. I've been getting some great response to some of mine lately (not so much this last one), but it's hit or miss. Very few comments on supernatural100. I mostly get them if I think it's a drabble (or collection of drabbles) worth posting on supernaturalfic instead.

But also... there was certainly a lull in feedback after about Christmas time. I had two major angst pieces come out since then that got very little feedback (I was kind of surprised), and then I have to admit that if you've written anything posted after about Dec. 24th... chances are I haven't read it yet. I got way behind at Christmas, and I have 2 major fandoms to keep up with. So that 's another possibility. :-(

BUT... I love these challenges. I've only missed the "Route 66" one back near the beginning, and sometimes I think I won't come up with anything but then... can't help myself :)

Welcome to our world.

(I have seen your Evil!Emma nickname elsewhere, and now I can't think if it was for SN or for something else I read, like House)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 6th, 2006 06:15 am (UTC)
Thanks for the welcome!

I have some longer fic in the works. Someone told me there was a threesome challenge so I've got the first of a three part series written for that which is a SN/Numb3rs crossover. I've also got a more case oriented SN/N crossover in the works. My SN fic so far has been short, but now that I'm caught up and have seen all of the aired episodes, I feel more comfortable with canon and might try for a longer fic at some point soon.

Evil!Emma has only appeared in the Numb3rs fandom as far as I know (I was given the moniker during a pseudo-comment porn session by one of my betas, along with a full Emma Frost outfit in black. /grins/) If there's another one out there I hope it's not in any fandoms I play in.

Then again, writing House might be fun... ;-)

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
paintercrow on February 7th, 2006 12:20 pm (UTC)
That was fun, love it when the guys goof on each other. Pop rocks, eww, if candy could be obnoxious that one would get my vote.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 8th, 2006 12:29 pm (UTC)
Thanks. It seemed an evil enough prank for the Brothers Winchester... ;-)