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14 February 2008 @ 10:56 am
Numb3rs Fic: In Time of Need: Revenge  
Written for melissima's 2008 Anti-Valentine Challenge
Posted to numb3rs_het

Title: In Time of Need: Revenge
Series/Universe: In Time of Need
Pairing/Characters: David/Liz, Don
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: In Security, Tabu
Summary: Liz tries to get back at Don after their breakup
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

They both know what's going on.

David's not under any misconceptions that there's going to be anything more than fucking going on between them, that Liz is even remotely interested in him.

Oddly he finds he doesn't care.

He's sure she picked him out because she wanted someone with a bigger dick than Don to rub it in his face.


He slides it in her slowly, wishing he didn't have to use a condom because she's so damn tight he's sure it would feel amazing bareback.

She wraps her impossibly long legs around him, urging him to get the fuck on with it.

So he does.

He slams into her, just hard enough to make her rethink her impatience. Surprisingly she just eggs him on: harder, faster, fuck you you bastard, fuck me already....

Liz wants rough? David can do rough.

Her breasts are small, no more than a B, but he grasps one in his hand, kneads it brusquely, watching her wince.

The other fists in those long luscious locks. Ever since the first time he saw her let her hair down he wanted to feel it between his fingers, preferably while she was sucking his cock.

Maybe there will be time for that later. Right now he's trying to screw her brains out.


Liz goes into work the next morning without showering, purposefully leaving her hair down so that every time she tosses it back over her shoulder the scent of sex wafts through the room.

David scrubs himself down twice in the shower as if he's trying to destroy evidence.

Don glares at Liz all day, but says nothing. He knows, but Liz miscalculated. He may or may not feel jealous, but he's too strong to let her see any reaction on his part.

Liz is pissed.

David is worried.

This is his boss. He didn't do this to cross him. He's been there. Typical breakup revenge sex. He just figured it was something Liz needed to get out of her system.

Favor for a friend.

Fuck buddies.

So if she's desperate enough to break their deal, to let Don know it was him...

In a heartbeat, it's all moot. Don sees Liz looking at David then shifts his gaze to him.

David holds his eyes, knowing that looking away is more telling than anything he'd read there.

Don just nods and goes back to work.

They both know what's going on.

Now David knows that neither of them cares.

Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 06:57 pm (UTC)
My lovely slashwife asked for angry sex for her Anti-Valentine challenge so here it is! /makes a flourish/ Voila!

This is second in the In Time of Need Series, which is more a concept than a series, but so be it.

I figured Liz might need to exorcise some of the bad feelings left over from In Security so fucking one of Don's co-workers so that he knows it? Petty and predictable. Still, it got me to try out a pairing I'd wanted to for my colors kink and even though I didn't dwell on the colors in the fic, they were just *there*.

Very special thanks to beta melissima for her assistance with this fic.


Emma DeMarais
melissima: Don browsmelissima on February 14th, 2008 07:00 pm (UTC)
Re: Confession
YAY! /Twirls you/ Naughty Liz and Guilty David make very nice companions for Pissy Don, so Thank you. :) ♥
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 07:55 pm (UTC)
Re: Confession

Thank you for the lovely inspirational challenge.

I'd been meaning to get my David/Liz bunny done and this gave me the perfect opening!

/♥s you back/
perhaps some frottage is in order: [numb3rs] Liz really?sororcula on February 14th, 2008 07:12 pm (UTC)
Ohhh my. This is my favorite line:

David scrubs himself down twice in the shower as if he's trying to destroy evidence.

P.S. At the top you said "posted to numb3rs_slash," but... I'm guessing that's a mistake?
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 07:15 pm (UTC)
I like that line too! Very fitting.

And why do you think it's a mistake?

If it's because it's not up yet it's because you're *fast*. /grins/ I'm holding off for a couple of minutes so Mel's challenge post is up first.
perhaps some frottage is in order: [numb3rs] Liz really?sororcula on February 14th, 2008 07:45 pm (UTC)
Waaaait. Is this a slash story disguising itself as a het story?
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC)
/tries on your slash goggles/

Damn, woman! These are strong!

It's only a slash story in your pervy mind, hon, but I like the way you think!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 07:50 pm (UTC)
Gah! You're right!


I copied from another fic's headers and had Safe Harbor on the brain, not this fic.


I'll go fix.

/needs more sleep/
perhaps some frottage is in order: [numb3rs] Don h0rsororcula on February 14th, 2008 07:56 pm (UTC)
LMAO! But! See. NOW, those last four lines to me TOTALLY mean that Don and David are going to end up fucking. So, yes. My slash goggles are strong at times. ;-)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 08:46 pm (UTC)
So Don fucks David hard as he makes him repeat everything Liz said when he was fucking her? ;-)

Turnabout is fair play. Hehehe
perhaps some frottage is in order: [numb3rs] David hells nawsororcula on February 15th, 2008 12:07 am (UTC)
EXACTLY, YES. (Despite what my icon says.)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 15th, 2008 12:09 am (UTC)

Well, Don/David *isn't* on my pairings list yet...

perhaps some frottage is in order: [numb3rs] David hells nawsororcula on February 15th, 2008 12:11 am (UTC)
I think it's pretty obvious to everyone here that that must be remedied.
hear me roar: UpsideDownmagisterequitum on February 14th, 2008 07:46 pm (UTC)
Hmm. Shame, Liz, Shame. Sees that her plan didn't quite work out how she wanted it to. And, oh, coming in to work like that...

Poor David. Scrubbing his skin. He got played, but at least Don knows what's up.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 08:08 pm (UTC)
Yes! /wags finger at Liz/

Being petty rarely pays off.

Bonus for David in the shower - nice visual!

Thanks for reading!
andi: Don woobieadmiralandrea on February 14th, 2008 08:02 pm (UTC)
I was interested that you chose David for this and not Colby, as he's the one who is interested in Liz on the show. Maybe that's why Liz wouldn't pick him.

I do feel a bit sorry for David though, in that he got used by Liz in a way he obviously wasn't expecting. She, though, wow, total bitch! She deserves a good slapping!

I feel most sorry for Don, though. Poor guy's trying to be something he's not and Liz treats him badly because of it.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 14th, 2008 08:12 pm (UTC)
If Liz sees Colby as potential? She wouldn't waste him on this. David is exactly what she's looking for - a guy she can feel pretty sure has a bigger dick than Don's. (Though she's the one acting like a big dick.)

David knew what he was getting into, but he really believed that Don wouldn't find out. At least when he did he didn't hold it against David. That's pretty cool of him.

Colby's kind of interested in every woman! He must be hard up, what from all the spy secrecy getting in the way of a love life. ;-)

Thanks for reading!
irena_adler: David gunirena_adler on February 14th, 2008 11:43 pm (UTC)
I felt sorry for David here, but, well, he agreed to it. :) Liz is a bitch but we knew that and Don is unable to respond how she wants but we knew that too ...
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on February 15th, 2008 12:05 am (UTC)
He did and Liz is.

The interesting part of the story has nothing to do with them (save the sex). It's *Don* who reacts in the unexpected way - at least as far as Liz and David are concerned. It's not that he's unable to respond. It's that he has the strength of character to *not* take the bait and to forgive David for what he did without making a fuss.
DarkEly: Sex on a Stickelysium1996 on February 15th, 2008 01:00 am (UTC)
ohh there's nothing better than angry sex against Don with Liz as the bater..... (see Liz/Coop angry sex...I did ummm yeah have no idea when) uhh anyway..

she doesn't know Don that well if she really thinks that he would 'get upset' especially in public.....

But poor David why does everyone beat on him!!!

the writers now YOU!


nice job and nice choice of her and David, very pretty
fredbassettfredbassett on February 25th, 2008 06:13 pm (UTC)
Great story! (And I still don't like Liz, LOL)