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17 March 2008 @ 11:16 pm
Numb3rs Fic: An Act of Devotion  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #151 – Devotion


Title: An Act of Devotion
Series/Universe: Staring Down the Barrel of a Gun
Pairing/Characters: Don, Charlie
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary:
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


It's midnight by the time he and Charlie drive up to the house.

Please... Let him be okay, please...

Charlie's useless, immobile. Don manages to get him up to his room, out of the clothes he plans on throwing away and into bed.

"I did it for you."

Charlie's voice is foreign, hollow.

"I told you when I was thirteen I'd do anything for you. I guess... I guess I finally did."

It takes a double dose of sleeping pills, but his eyes eventually close.

It's Don who suffers the painful vigil, waiting for the nightmares to commence.

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Cynthia: CD Heavy Secret by angeliksmall1trackmind on March 18th, 2008 06:30 am (UTC)
Oh, ouch. And wonderfully done. I'm not sure who I feel more sorry for.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on March 18th, 2008 06:33 am (UTC)
Thanks. It's a close call for me too...
Tamanna: charlie equationsswingandswirl on March 18th, 2008 06:48 am (UTC)
*whimper* Oh, boys. *is not sure who to feel worse for*

I think I'm going to go have a good cry now.

Brilliant job, Emma.
ladygray99ladygray99 on March 18th, 2008 09:12 am (UTC)
:( poor babies.
telperion_15: DonBWtelperion_15 on March 18th, 2008 10:57 am (UTC)
Oh... *hugs the boys*

The irony is that Don would have done anything to protect Charlie from this.
melissima: Sad Charlie by <lj user=delgaserasca>melissima on March 18th, 2008 01:15 pm (UTC)
/smishes you/.../smishes the poor, sad boys./ I love this series so much! Gah! Waiting for nightmares to start when you know they're coming just totally sucks.

{    ♫ siri ♫    }thisissirius on March 18th, 2008 01:31 pm (UTC)
oh, oh boys!

i don't know what to say! or who needs the most comfort. oh, oh :(
batgurl10batgurl10 on March 18th, 2008 04:05 pm (UTC)
Hey emma
Im really enjoying these little vignettes. You manage to capture SO MUCH in so few words. Really wish they were longer, but thats cuz theyre so GOOD.

"I told you when I was thirteen I'd do anything for you. I guess... I guess I finally did."

WOW--wish wed get this scenario on screen. :-)
fredbassettfredbassett on March 18th, 2008 08:05 pm (UTC)
Ouch, poor boys. Powerful last line.
perhaps some frottage is in order: [spn] Jo wide-eyedsororcula on March 19th, 2008 12:19 am (UTC)
Meep.

"I told you when I was thirteen I'd do anything for you. I guess... I guess I finally did."

I'm kind of intrigued by this line! Hmm.
hear me roar: UpsideDownmagisterequitum on March 19th, 2008 01:48 am (UTC)
Oh no. Charlie's line about doing anything is so powerful. And the last line about the nightmares...

Great piece, Emma.