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27 February 2009 @ 11:59 pm
Leverage Fic: In an Unguarded Moment  
Written for leverage100 Challenge 2 – Caught
Crossposted to geteven_getfic


Title: In an Unguarded Moment
Pairing/Characters: Nate/Maggie, Parker
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Season 1
Summary: When Nate hermits himself away to drink the team brings in Maggie to help
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


"I caught the bad guy - you always said that was Daddy's job, catching bad guys - but it didn't help. It didn't bring you back..."

Nate almost knocked over his mostly empty Scotch bottle reaching out to pick up the picture frame.

"I was supposed to take care of you, Sam. I failed you."

A creak of floorboard made him lift his head abruptly.

Maggie stood hovering in the doorway.

"Hello, Nate."

"How did you get in?" he sputtered.

She just shrugged. "Parker."

She crouched down in front of him, smoothing his hair from his face.

"Let me help."

--

"He's been ignoring us for days, drinking - well, more than normal." Parker trotted briskly up to Nate's front door and frowned when she discovered Maggie was still halfway down the walkway. "He won't let us in and he won't come out. We figured you might have a better shot."

"It's this time of year," Maggie explained when she caught up to her. "Today would have been Sam's birthday."

Parker bent down and picked the lock, pushing the door open silently.

"He's not armed," she whispered. "At least we don't think so." She patted Maggie on the arm. "Good luck!"

--

Despite the sour stench of alcohol, Maggie recognized the familiar scent of Nate beneath it all as her fingers threaded through his unkempt hair.

"I'm starting to forget how Sam smelled..." Her breath caught, the revelation like a hand squeezing her heart. "A mother shouldn't forget that, should she? How her child smelled?"

"Maggie..." Nate gazed at her with bloodshot eyes, all guilt and shame and the deepest pain any man could be forced to bear. "I am so sorry."

"Hush," she whispered, pulling him into her arms. "Only ten hours left of the day. We'll get through them together."

-L-
 
 
 
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on February 28th, 2009 09:16 am (UTC)
Confession
Title from The Church song The Unguarded Moment with the bonus irony that thieves love to get past guards yet this time it's the one who isn't a thief who succeeds. (Extra bonus for the lyric "I knew you'd find me drinking.")

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
rodlox: going to hugrodlox on February 28th, 2009 09:29 am (UTC)
good going, Parker, helping out.

*sniffles*
klutzy_girlklutzy_girl on February 28th, 2009 02:04 pm (UTC)
Great fic. I can see Nate's alcoholism worsening on Sam's birthday. At least Parker brought in Maggie to help.
Tes Tickles: What Would Parker Do?testickles on February 28th, 2009 05:48 pm (UTC)
"Only ten hours left of the day. We'll get through them together."

I loved all of this, the way you captured the characters in a few short words, but this was the line that really got to me. It encapsulates how hard grief is perfectly, I think, and made a perfect ending line. I love this.
Karen: leverage natebyrons_brain on February 28th, 2009 06:21 pm (UTC)
::sniffles:: so sad but lovely....
theoriginal_isttheoriginal_ist on February 28th, 2009 06:43 pm (UTC)
Really good. This is very believable and I can totally see this happening. Great job.
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Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on March 18th, 2009 07:14 am (UTC)
YW!

Nate was made for angst. /sigh/

Thanks for coming to read and comment!