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21 June 2009 @ 06:19 pm
Numb3rs Fic: I Do  
Written for numb3rs100 Reader Reward

Title: I Do
Pairing/Characters: Alan/Margaret
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 200
Spoilers: UP
Summary: Alan and Margaret at the beginning and end of their married life
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

She's never been so nervous.

But as Margaret smooths the satin of her gown she sees in the mirror the wife to be, the grown woman her mother promised she'd become when she bemoaned at thirteen that no boy would ever like her.

Alan loves her.

This, she's sure of.


He's never been so anxious.

But as Alan takes his place by the rabbi he feels a surge of responsibility, of pride at being a husband with his own family, the way his father promised he'd feel when he first proposed.

Margaret loves him.

This, he'd swear by.


"I do."


She's never been so scared.

But as her husband takes her hand, Margaret feels his strength and is calmed by the presence of the man who has been her rock for three decades - nowhere near long enough.

She loves him.

But it's time to go.


He's never been so lost.

But as he watches his wife's eyes flutter closed, Alan's filled to overflowing with love for this amazing woman who has filled his life with joy and his house with wonderful children.

He loves her.

But he has to let her go.


"I'd marry you all over again," he whispers.

Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 01:19 am (UTC)
This fic was custom written for riverotter1951 as part of the Reader's Dozen promotion at numb3rs100 back in late 2006. /hides in shame/ (The computer that had all my records for N100 reward fic died a horrible death so if there's anyone left who earned fic and didn't get it, please let me know! Lee, I'm still waiting for the Wildcard bunny to return to me. /glares at muse. Sorry!) She earned the maximum two fic and I figured it would be nice to make them related in a kind of mini-series.

She asked for Alan/Margaret with a prompt of Marriage. I started out with lovely wedding fic, but the angster in me just had to end it on a bittersweet note. Yes, I am an evil author who wants readers to cry so forgive me!

Thank you to riverotter1951 for supporting numb3rs100 (and for your patience!). I hope you enjoy this little look into the enduring love of Alan and Margaret.


Emma DeMarais
hear me roarmagisterequitum on June 22nd, 2009 01:35 am (UTC)
Oh this made me want to cry.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 01:37 am (UTC)
/hands over tissue box/

hear me roarmagisterequitum on June 22nd, 2009 01:38 am (UTC)

But this was fantastic and I love the breaking up of both of their thoughts.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 01:40 am (UTC)
Thanks. I think it turned out rather nicely even if it is kind of heartbreaking.
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Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 02:19 am (UTC)

Thank you.
rubynye on June 22nd, 2009 01:44 am (UTC)
Here, have my tears, you've earned them.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 02:20 am (UTC)
/gives you a nice linen handkerchief/

Oh, hon. I am glad to have earned them, but such a cost...

ladygray99ladygray99 on June 22nd, 2009 03:43 am (UTC)
Damn it. I just fucking cried.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 03:49 am (UTC)

(Not that it helps, but I got choked up just typing it and I *knew* what was coming!)
Annasummere7 on June 22nd, 2009 04:01 am (UTC)
Awwwww, this was so bittersweet, but so amazing.


*cries just a little*
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on June 22nd, 2009 04:10 am (UTC)
Thank you! Clearly I need to stock up on tissues before I write another one of these sad fic.

/hands over spare box of tissues/
Candi: I love youmustangcandi on June 22nd, 2009 11:55 am (UTC)
I wish I could say something more articulate, but all I can say is that this... was just wonderful. Beautiful story. Damn near made me cry.
riverotter1951: fractal heartriverotter1951 on June 22nd, 2009 01:56 pm (UTC)
Thank you very much. I like the way you showed the beginning and the ending of their life together.

I hope the Wildcard bunny returns. Offers the Muse a box of Belgian truffles.
bobthesungodbobthesungod on June 24th, 2009 09:28 pm (UTC)
I totally didn't expect the twist of time to happen! And it just broke me!

I feel so sad for Alan. :/