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25 October 2009 @ 04:28 pm
Numb3rs Fic: An Animal Hunger  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #234 – Chew

Title: An Animal Hunger
Pairing/Characters: Don/Charlie
Rating: NC17
Word Count: 200
Spoilers: None
Summary: Charlie gets in over his head thinking he can handle Don's dark side
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

"You don't have to treat me like I'm fragile..."

"You can be rough with me..."

"You can't hurt me..."

Only belatedly Charlie fears he may have bitten off more than he can chew.

This dark Don is a brother he doesn't recognize.

He nagged Don to share the ugly places he goes in his head with him, but he had no idea.

There will be bruises; he'll have to wear long sleeves for a while. Charlie hopes they won't look too much like handprints, hopes he won't need more than one sick day spent wincing in bed to recover.

He cries out as his shoulders are wrenched back, Don's fingers gripping like claws on his biceps as he ruts hard, cock pummeling Charlie's ass - raw feral anger lashing out.

Charlie catches a glimpse of them fucking in the mirror: Don is glorious in this animal state - teeth bared, head thrown back, a snarling vicious howl on his lips.

Charlie is the prey to his brother-predator. Trembling, he surrenders to be devoured: sharp teeth, searing pleasure-pain and then oblivion.

The moon rises, Charlie is spread across the sheets like the remains of a feast and Don is still hungry.

Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on October 25th, 2009 11:30 pm (UTC)
No beta for this one, but a grateful wave to maerhys and melissima for taking a quick look at the first version for me so I had the strength to do the massive amounts of rewriting necessary to like this enough to publish it.


Emma DeMarais
Maerhys: π by your sidemaerhys on October 25th, 2009 11:37 pm (UTC)
I love this lots. Charlie's ambiguous feelings feel very real and Dark!Don is delicious.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 25th, 2009 11:40 pm (UTC)
Yay! I'm glad you like the final version. I felt weird about Charlie's reactions, but I trusted that was what was supposed to be in the fic. Thanks!
melissima: Don browsmelissima on October 25th, 2009 11:44 pm (UTC)
Mmmm...lusty, greedy, out of control Don. He's yummy even when he's a tad scary. *drools*
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 12:36 am (UTC)
Scary!Ian is canon so why not enjoy Scary!Don every once in a blue moon? ;-)
melissima: Evil by <lj user=melissima>melissima on October 26th, 2009 12:54 am (UTC)
I am totally up for that. :D
rubynye: Don (by weirdkid624)rubynye on October 26th, 2009 12:31 am (UTC)
Ooooooh. That is hot and dark in the best ways.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 12:36 am (UTC)
Thanks, hon! Glad it worked for you.
t_vo0810: Imp Charliet_vo0810 on October 26th, 2009 12:57 am (UTC)
mmmmm i like the way this one has an almost horror flair and evokes the imagery of werewolves and other primal beasts that go bump in the night. Which then makes me giggle cause what's that old euphemism? The beasts with two backs? Ok that was just wrong. but I really like Charlie wanting to know all of Don, even his dark side and then realizing Don's dark side is alot blacker than he anticipated. And primal Don, hawt as hell. Bruised Charlie so he has to take a sick day and wear long sleeves? Something is very wrong with me cause i like that more than i should. :) u should tell mel this fic counts towards your halloween contribution.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 01:23 am (UTC)
Hee! I'm glad the werewolf hint came through. I figured if people went to wolf or werewolf either would evoke what I was going for. I could do werewolves for real for Halloween, but I think Val's got the corner on that market. (But I do know Mel likes zombies!)

I love dark fic so this, you're right, borders on horror but I think that's hot. Plus, Dark!Don animalistic sex? Hell yes! And I can't find any bad in Charlie+rough sex so there you go.

I may have to crossover or fuse Numb3rs with Blood Ties so I can give Don some supernatural sex pollen type animalistic possession or something just so I can spend more than 300 words on it.

Ooh! I forgot! I have a sequel to write for Prey! Perfect! Hee!
devon99 on October 26th, 2009 07:29 pm (UTC)
Nicely done. Very dark fic. First thought was ooh, Don = Madison, and now Charlie must kill him to save him. Hee, maybe I watch too much SPN?

Can't ever see regular Don being so rough with him, no matter how dark his inner demons get.

I must admit, I am enjoying the little spate of Charlie/Don fic that has emerged this past week:)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 07:42 pm (UTC)
Yay for the renewed Don/Charlie love, eh? I'm pleased with it as well. (Did you see that SPNer hunters_retreat joined in as well?)

It's a stretch for Don, yes, but I wanted to go there anyway. The moon imagery I figured would give people wolf or werewolf - whichever place they wanted to go. Both evoke enough animal to feed the story.

I kind of wanted to write an SPN fic where Madison lived. It was one of the Sam pairings I actually liked. (I prefer Sarah though.) We've already got someone writing Numb3rs werewolf fic, so I'll have to play with that bunny elsewhere.

/laughs out loud at the unexpected idea of Oz/Madison and Madison/Veruca werewolf porn/
devon99 on October 26th, 2009 08:00 pm (UTC)
Yes I did. She is on my flist. She has just started watching. I think she is on Season Two now. She is a fabulous writer and I may have squeed when she said she was writing N3 fic. If you ever have time for any SPN reading, check out her Clocks verse. It's fab, although its a WIP.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 08:28 pm (UTC)
I normally shy away from WIPs, but I may have to see about taking a peek. I finally got around to reading the last of Mae's Don/Charlie fic, but I'm so helplessly behind in fic overall (I suck at reading in equal measure to how much I zoom at writing) I may just have to admit defeat.

HR is also a ficfinishing person so I know her from there. I'm thrilled to see SPNers come over to N3. It seems that since Kripke's been doing a less than steller job feeding us lovely brother moments that the SPN fen are willing to look elsewhere for a fix. /grins/ Come to Numb3rs! We have cookies curls! Hehehe
Cynthia: CD Hands Off by shantalanadevil1trackmind on October 26th, 2009 09:35 pm (UTC)
I really like this! You can feel Don's fierceness and Charlie, just trying to endure.

Don is still hungry.

Love that last bit!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on October 26th, 2009 09:41 pm (UTC)
Thanks, hon! It means a lot to me when you like one of my fic.