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05 December 2009 @ 02:18 pm
The Unit Fic: Covert Mission  
Written for varietypack100 Multi-Fandom Challenge
Emma DeMarais VarietyPack100 Prompt Table
Crossposted to unit_command

Title: Covert Mission
Pairing/Characters: Mack/Bob
Rating: R
Spoilers: None
Summary: Prompt - Sound
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

They scatter, as planned, in Bolivia.

They've got two days to make it back to the States and while that's the time they're given Jonas is going to look askance at them if it takes both of them that long to get home.

Bob says they should flip for it, but Mack says he'll take the heat. He's the senior member of the team so if Bob comes back late too many times he'll be looked at with concern. Mack's solid.

They hole up in an abandoned house on the far outskirts of a no name town along the way. No one knows them there; hell no one knows they are there. It's just Mack, Bob and hours alone where they can fuck as loud as they want, be as brutal and rough as they please with no worries about anyone hearing a sound.

Bob's hands grasp Mack's ass, urging him on.

Mack's teeth graze Bob's neck, leaving no marks.

They growl and grunt, slam and shove and then collapse to the floor when it's done.

They've got an hour to rest, to get their legs able to work again, and then Bob needs to slip away to steal a plane while Mack finds himself a slow boat home.

They carry out the most covert missions on the planet.

This affair is just another one of them.

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 5th, 2009 10:23 pm (UTC)
This ficlet started out being written for last year's Holiday Gifts for my F-list prompt from zou2, but since I hadn't published any straight up Unit fic in 2009 (bad me, second year in a row I wait until December!) I decided to turn it into a proper published fic. Besides, I have too many people on my F-list who'd enjoy some Mack/Bob porn even if it's barely R worthy. ;-)


Emma DeMarais
fyreflyfyrefly101 on December 6th, 2009 01:54 am (UTC)
Besides, I have too many people on my F-list who'd enjoy some Mack/Bob porn

Adding myself to that list. And to thoroughly enjoying this snippet of it. But it's the almost incidental details of their parting that get me - Bob nicking a plane, Mack on a slow boat, and how together they're *almost* just like any other mission. Except there's so much more involved. Backstory and front story and plot to the porn :)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on December 6th, 2009 07:28 am (UTC)
We're a short list we Unit fans, but when you've got Max Martini it's hard to not find him hot with just about anyone. /grins/

Not sure if you read my long Mack/Bob fic Better Halves, but I hadn't realized how much I liked that pairing until I got the request to write it as a gift. Now I really like it.

And yeah, I have a really hard time writing true PWPs. Those pesky plots just keep foiling my plans. ;-)
One Part Exuberance; Two Parts Obsession: billy smilespenguingal on December 6th, 2009 05:19 am (UTC)
*nngh* Yes, that. That all over. I can just see them together, fucking with abandon. God the /sounds/ they must make when they're together.

I like this a lot.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on December 6th, 2009 07:25 am (UTC)
Hell yes! I wish I could write fic with sound effects because they'd knock down pieces of drywall getting violent with each other like that. Totally free to make noise they would so be worth recording to listen back to. Rawr.
melissima: SO HOTmelissima on December 6th, 2009 07:27 am (UTC)

/Crawls back into chair, so as to reach keyboard./

Oh yeah, that. Gimme. Who's got a camcorder?

Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on December 6th, 2009 10:46 am (UTC)
Srsly, if that's a surveillance job? Everyone can make like Don and forget you and I in the surveillance van because David and Colby have nothing on us! We could so watch that for days! LOL

Speaking of, I think BB might have left the chat room camcorder with one of the clones. Uh oh. ;-)
zou2zou2 on December 7th, 2009 08:19 am (UTC)
OMG!!! You remembered and you did it for me. It might be short and dirty, but it was the best early x-mas gift ever. When I saw the email from you I was shocked.

Now, if we can just get you to keep this up. I cannot tell you how many times I've read your other story. Bob is my weakness...and with Mack they are perfection.

BTW, LOVE the last sentence.

Gotta go now, must read and a few dozen more times.

Thank you so much for this. You are an porn angel.
Swedish for "Smith": NCIS Tony B&Wcolls on December 13th, 2009 07:02 pm (UTC)
I've been watching this series on DVD and am SHOCKED there's not a bigger fandom for it. I'm also shocked there's not more slash for this pairing. Especially when you come across something like this - I mean, wow!

Thank you! :)
*rushes off to read more*
sky_blue2sky_blue2 on January 13th, 2010 09:53 pm (UTC)
OMG I didn't know you wrote the Unit slash - I have to go find the other fic you were talking about. There is so not enough Mac/Bob slash or even just Unit fiction out there general (well at least well written stuff)

This story was amazing - but then I haven't read anything of your that isn't. My only bad comment (and it's purely selfish) is that it's too short LOL. Seriously please don't ever stop writing =)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on January 13th, 2010 11:07 pm (UTC)
Yay another Unit reader!

I haven't written a ton of it, but I've got variety: slash, het, gen and crossovers. You can click on the tag that says theunit on it to see all of them or check out my Memories. I have all my fic organized by fandom and pairing and rating there so you can see all I've got at a glance.

I'm glad you enjoy my stories and if you liked this one then I'm sure you'll like Better Halves - the long Mack/Bob fic. It really turned out appealing IMHO.

FWIW I'm working on a long gen crossover with Mack from The Unit and Charlie from Numb3rs. It's pretty cool - I just need to write the ending. (Which is killing me, but hopefully it will be out later this year.)

Thanks again for all your kind words!