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22 June 2006 @ 12:22 am
Numb3rs Fic: Kink/Seduction  
Written for audrarose's slash_100 Numb3rs Claim
Audra Rose Slash_100 Prompt Table
Crossposted to numb3rs_slash


Title: Kink/Seduction
Pairing/Characters: David/Colby/OFC
Rating: R
Spoilers: Judgment Call
Summary: Prompts - Kink, Seduction
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


072. Kink

There's attraction there.

A spark.

In the field, in the office, having a beer after a tough case...

It's there.

But they can't have each other, although they've danced around it since Don partnered them up. Guys don't get far in the FBI if it's known that they fuck other men, especially their partners, so they can't get involved.

They've agreed on this repeatedly.

But that spark is still there.

Late one night, splitting a six pack as usual, they discover they share a secret kink: threesomes.

It's perfect. They can use the excuse of a woman – and a lot of alcohol – to explain it all away if they get caught.

David says there's almost no chance they'll get caught, but military man Colby always has to have a backup plan.

So they agree and find an out of town seminar worth attending that Don approves for both of them.

All that's left is finding a woman.

One they both like.

One who's willing.

One who understands.



074. Seduction

David's smooth, but Colby's surprisingly charming when he turns it on.

They scout women for about an hour, finding their tastes aren't too far off.

Both their heads turn when a stunning woman with long black hair walks in the room, all dark olive skin and sultry brown eyes.

They approach her simultaneously.

They compliment her.

They make her smile.

She flirts with them both, teasing that it's hard to choose between them.

David teases back that she shouldn't have to choose.

They drink – a lot.

She won't go to their room, but invites them to come to hers.

They go.

They're tentative at first, but it's soon clear she's figured them out and is turned on by the prospect of not just being with them but watching them together as well.

They lavish her with attention and she encourages them to explore.

Hands and mouths move seamlessly from pale flesh to amber to chocolate.

She takes a turn with each of them first and they eventually end up all together, Colby fucking her as David fucks him.

They collapse in a colorful tangle of limbs when they're finally fully sated.

She makes them leave afterwards, but gives them her number.

She asks them to call her if they're ever in town again.

On the trip back, Colby already has the seminar schedule out and is ticking off possibilities when David stops him.

One glance and a small nod and they understand each other completely.

They don't need excuses anymore.

But that doesn't mean they won't come back...

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 22nd, 2006 07:29 am (UTC)
Confession
I don't really get the David/Colby pairing, but I know I've seen a lot of people get excited over it in recent months. I figured when I took on this challenge one of the things I could do with it is write pairings I didn't normally spend time on. It was interesting to write them though, and I think once I see more of them as partners in Season 3 I might have a better shot at writing longer fic with this pairing, but for now this will have to do. :-)

BTW, there is a threesome prompt in the table and I did ask for it. Audra decided she wanted to keep it though, so I used these prompts to work my threesome in without needing a prompt for it. ;-)

As always, please go visit Audra's prompt table linked above for more great fic in this claim.

Very special thanks to betas iolsai and monkeyfun1 for their assistance with this fic.

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
Ceares: scientologyceares on June 22nd, 2006 08:39 am (UTC)
Yes! More David/Colby. Love this, lucky, lucky girl.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:05 am (UTC)
Even before I published this I got a request to expand it. It might be fun to write a longer fic with this threesome. I love the color visual with all of their skin tones...

Glad you liked it.

-Emma
Karen: Numb3rs Donbyrons_brain on June 22nd, 2006 11:52 am (UTC)
Wow, great drabbles, there just isn't enough David/Colby out there
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:07 am (UTC)
Thanks. I'll try writing them again, but no promises...

Glad you enjoyed them.

-Emma
Empress Ena: Gay foursome - 3severusslave on June 22nd, 2006 12:18 pm (UTC)
Now, for saying that you don't get the pairing you certainly write them well! :D
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:12 am (UTC)
That's nice of you to say. Thank you.

To be honest, I don't ship anyone on Numb3rs so all of the pairings I write aren't ships I'm into. There's just ones I get and enjoy more than others. Okay, and some that squick me like Don/Amita. ;-)

OMG!
/blushes/

I just noticed your icon. Oh my! I find myself suddenly needing to know the plural of the word apocalypse penis. ;-)
/winks to BTVS Riley fans out there/

Thanks for your nice comment!

-Emma
Empress Ena: Gay foursome - 1severusslave on June 23rd, 2006 01:23 am (UTC)
I think it's penii, but English butchered it to penises. Meh. ;)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:34 am (UTC)
Oh my! Another porny icon!

(Where's pro_f_iler when you need him for commentary?) ;-)

Wikipedia says the plural is 'penises or penes', neither of which sounds as good as penii. /grins/

Then again, English isn't the handiest language when it comes to these things. We still don't have a decent term for the stage between boyfriend and fiance. /shakes head/ Significant other... How lame a term is that?

-Emma
Empress Ena: Gay foursome - 2severusslave on June 23rd, 2006 01:41 am (UTC)
Hee. More?

Longterm partner? ...hm. Partner.

I don't know where I got he notion of penii, maybe Latin lessons long past? Anyway, still my prefered form of plural.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 02:15 am (UTC)
Okay, at least they *all* look like they're having fun in that one. ;-)

Sadly, the term partner now implies gay, so it's not as all purpose as something generic like lover. Now we just need a single word that basically says 'live in lover' and we're good. ;-)

Personally, I'd love to introduce the man in my life as my lover at a party just to see people's reactions. Hehehe

-Emma
gyen_gaoltosing: Sexy Torigyen_gaoltosing on June 22nd, 2006 03:12 pm (UTC)
You know, the pairing generally doesn’t do much for me either. Regardless, this fic rules, Emma! Really, really good. I love the premise.

I’ve noticed a change in your writing recently--you’ve been playing around with style and nuances, and it’s really working. Not that there was anything wrong with your writing before, but I can see you stretching out and honing your skills, and it’s cool. :D
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:22 am (UTC)
You know, the pairing generally doesn't do much for me either. Regardless, this fic rules, Emma!

Thank you! I like both guys on their own, but not seeing them together easily made this a bit of a challenge. Introducing a woman helped so I could focus on the kink and not on the relationship between the men.

I've noticed a change in your writing recently--you've been playing around with style and nuances, and it's really working. Not that there was anything wrong with your writing before, but I can see you stretching out and honing your skills, and it's cool. :D

And here I thought no one would notice any difference! LOL! Thanks for proving me wrong.

Since I do dialogue well naturally, my challenge for the greater part of the slash_100 fic was to write stories without any dialogue at all. I did that for most of the prompts until I was convinced I'd met my goal then allowed the latter fic to finally have dialogue in them.

Past that I'm always trying to experiment. I played with verb tenses for a while, which was interesting but short lived. I often try to write imagery like asemic does, but it either lasts about one paragraph before I fall back into my old ways or it sucks really bad and I toss it. I acknowledge that I have limitations, but that doesn't mean I accept them for all time. /grins/ One of these days I'll manage a story rich with images and metaphors and all the literary devices that elude me in my normal style. I just don't think it will be this year. ;-)

Thanks for your very kinds words, Gyen! They mean so much more coming from you! :-)

-Emma
Keylaneverbelonged on June 22nd, 2006 04:43 pm (UTC)
/claps/ Awesome. (and why I am clapping? /shrugs/) /dances/ Awesome. /hugs David/Colby/
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on June 23rd, 2006 01:26 am (UTC)
Keyla, my dear, making you happy is worth all this effort with fic. I don't mind staying up past midnight just to publish fic if it means you have this sort of happy reaction the next day. :-)

Keep it coming...

Thanks,

Emma
Keylaneverbelonged on June 23rd, 2006 01:27 am (UTC)
/smiles/