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18 July 2006 @ 11:15 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Dirty  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #64 – Smoke

Title: Dirty
Pairing/Characters: Charlie/OFC
Rating: R
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: None
Summary: Charlie's finally an adult and can do whatever he wants
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

She languidly hands him her cigarette and he accepts it wordlessly.

He takes a shallow drag and leisurely blows out the smoke between pursed lips.

He's had sex.

He's had alcohol.

Now he's smoking.

Charlie feels more like an adult now than he ever has in his entire life.

It's a rush, all this adulthood at once, and suddenly he's hard again.

He crushes the cigarette in the ashtray and turns back to the naked woman on the bed beside him.

He slips easily between her waiting legs, feeling as dirty as the taste in his mouth and liking it.

The Girl with the Dark Side!scots_rock on July 19th, 2006 08:07 am (UTC)
woah. hot! O.O actually i could really imagine charlie doing that! great drabble!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 19th, 2006 08:44 pm (UTC)
Thanks. It wasn't hard to imagine him at say 18 or 19 trying to make up for lost time. I did have to excise a line about how he'd practiced smoking at Cambridge /grins/ but it works fine without it.

Glad you liked it!

Karen: Numb3rs Donbyrons_brain on July 19th, 2006 10:14 am (UTC)
hehehehe, very naughty, I love it....

Is Don going to spank Charlie now for being a bad boy?
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 19th, 2006 08:46 pm (UTC)
LOL! You and your requests! I did manage some bonnet action for you at least, although it wasn't exactly what you asked for. ;-)

/loves the naughty/


Karen: Bones Zack Addybyrons_brain on July 19th, 2006 09:03 pm (UTC)
::flutters eyelids:: I try....
gyen_gaoltosing: Tattoo Lurvegyen_gaoltosing on July 19th, 2006 02:44 pm (UTC)
This made me giggle quite naughtily. >:D Feeling dirty is a lot of fun, isn't it?

And strangely, the thought of Charlie smoking is HAWT, almost as hot as the thought of Don doing it.
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 19th, 2006 08:52 pm (UTC)

/wants to be bad/
/is a dirty girl/

Well, for me Charlie's got a sexier mouth for smoking with his full lips. Don's got a great mouth - open or shut - but picturing Charlie's lips pursed and blowing out smoke is how this whole thing started.

Oh man, now I want to chew on his my Boy's *somebody's* lower lip!

Telli: Charlie waking uptelligirl on July 19th, 2006 08:57 pm (UTC)
DAMN! That was some hot imagery.
*is drooling*
Now I'll be picturing Charlie naked all day.

:D Thanks!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on July 19th, 2006 09:04 pm (UTC)
Not seeing any bad side to that!

Of course the Charlie in my fic hasn't put on weight like DK has lately. ;-)