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12 March 2011 @ 11:30 pm
White Collar Fic: Under the Influence  
Written for whitecollar100 Challenge #036 – Skin


Title: Under the Influence
Pairing/Characters: Neal/Sara, Mozzie
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Power Play
Summary: Sara's reaction during the blackout with Neal in the archives
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


'God, yes!' 'What the hell are you thinking?' 'This is crazy!'

Thoughts war in a maelstrom in Sara's head as her body ignores them, aflame with every touch of Neal's nimble hands: pulling her blouse away, shoving her skirt up, gripping her thighs tightly as he presses her into the wall with his taut body and the force of his desire for her.

She feels giddy, like she's high, and realizes she's under the influence of Neal Caffrey. This is why his cons worked, why female marks spoke wistfully of him long after he'd stolen their artwork and jewelry. Sara let him get too close and now the Caffrey charisma has lured her under its spell.

His kisses devour her, worship her, as if she's the most desirable woman on the planet - like she is the oxygen he needs to survive. To be the sole focus of such a brilliant man is heady, overwhelming.

It's too good... Those assured hands with just the perfect amount of roughness, the adrenaline fueled wantonness of a semi-public location, those slender hips between her legs making her ache in anticipation to feel him inside her.

He's hard already against her thigh as her bared skin hums electric with need, her panties damp with impatience. His breath is hot against her neck and he smells like sex and sweat and so good she thinks she might just have to lick him to cement this moment in her senses forever.

The tiny remaining rational part of her brain that values her reputation sends up a silent plea for intercession.

And then Mozzie appears.

She's never been so ungrateful for a last minute rescue in her life, but she hopes her career - and the last remaining shreds of her self-respect - will thank her later.

o--c
 
 
 
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on March 13th, 2011 07:30 am (UTC)
Confession
I confess it took four versions to get this fic to a point where I was willing to publish it. The first version was totally thrown out and the second version went through some notable changes to get to what you see here, which is only an incredibly tiny fraction as hot as the real thing was on screen.

After all, what mere words can compare to shirtless Neal?

Very special thanks to beta melissima for her assistance with this fic.

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
SamuelJames: White Collar-Neal Caffreysamueljames on March 13th, 2011 11:07 am (UTC)
This is gorgeous, loved Sara's POV.
queenaeronqueenaeron on March 13th, 2011 12:36 pm (UTC)
I'm as breathless as Sara! Incredibly hot! D@mn Mozzie! :-)
ladygray99: WC100ladygray99 on March 13th, 2011 02:32 pm (UTC)
I really liked this being from Sara's POV and I'm sure she wanted to whack Mozzie one.