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21 November 2011 @ 08:27 pm
Numb3rs Fic: With Blinded Eyes  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #342 - Silk

Title: With Blinded Eyes
Pairing/Characters: Don/Robin
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Seasons 1-2
Summary: With a silk blindfold on all Robin can do is feel and wait
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

Heated skin shivers, a supple spine shuddering with anticipation.

Silk covers long lashes, hides sight with blinded eyes.

Touch is her world now, fingertips his language.

He speaks to her with each caress, each silent declaration of love punctuated with hot breath on her neck.

She feels his bulk tantalizingly close, wanting more, wanting contact.

She shifts, seeking, only to be admonished with a clucking tongue.

Hands send a message: wait, the best is yet to come.

But her heart races with impatience.

Her lips part, but no words come in supplication.

Her breath is her response.

It says: please.

ladygray99ladygray99 on November 22nd, 2011 04:58 am (UTC)
I'm usually not into Don/Robin but this was pretty hot.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 22nd, 2011 05:02 am (UTC)

Try picturing it as Ian/Nikki or Ian/Liz then. That's who I thought about changing it to, but my initial was Don/Robin for some reason.
ladygray99ladygray99 on November 22nd, 2011 05:04 am (UTC)
Oh, I'd so do Ian/Liz for this one for some reason.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 22nd, 2011 05:06 am (UTC)
Yeah, I thought Liz would be lovely with silk over her eyes, but Ian and love don't go well together so I went with my first pick. /shrugs/
ladygray99ladygray99 on November 22nd, 2011 05:08 am (UTC)
I have a couple of smoochy Ian's if you ever need to borrow one. ;-)
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on November 22nd, 2011 05:11 am (UTC)
HAHAHA! Oh, I wish! I think that's why I have no long Ian drabble series. I can't get him to be lovey dovey enough. /snickers/
Ma Yumi: Don2ym4yum1 on November 22nd, 2011 01:20 pm (UTC)
it was pretty perfect to me! two words: more please!
Ayesha: frescobrowngirl on November 22nd, 2011 03:50 pm (UTC)
I love this. Robin is so dynamic that it must mean a whole lot for Don to get her to be still and just feel for a bit.