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18 March 2012 @ 06:35 pm
White Collar Fic: My Aim is True  
Written for whitecollar100 Challenge #089 - Aim

Title: My Aim is True
Pairing/Characters: Peter/Elizabeth, Neal
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 300
Spoilers: Seasons 1-3
Summary: Neal gets an unexpected visit while in Paris
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

"This seat taken?"

Neal looked up from his newspaper and morning coffee, stunned.

"Elizabeth? Where's Peter?" He threw down his newspaper, stood up rapidly and scanned the environment with frantic eyes. "You brought the bureau. They found me."

"No, silly. Sit down." Elizabeth tugged him ardently enough to get him to sit down again. "No FBI. Just Peter and I."

A bittersweet smile he couldn't force back stole over his handsome face. "Peter..." His gaze returned to the woman across from him. "I don't understand."

"You will," she said, patting his hand. "But I'll let Peter explain. It's his story."

As if on queue, Peter bounded across the street and up to the cafe. "Neal!"

"Peter!" The men embraced and Neal fought getting choked up at the reunion.

Elizabeth pulled over another chair to the tiny table.

"What's going on? Why am I not being brought in?"

"Because you're no longer a prisoner," Peter explained. "Remember how the parole board promised you an answer by 5:00PM?"


"They were all set to pronounce you a free man, but they ran a couple of minutes over."

"So?" Neal looked confused. "It shouldn't matter. I cut my anklet."

"At 5:01PM," Peter smirked. "The parole board decided to release you at 5:04PM, but backdated the decision to 5:00PM because that's when they had promised you an answer. So at 5:01PM you were technically a free man."

"So I didn't have to run?"

"It's probably good that you did," Elizabeth piped up. "Kramer still had it in for you. That took a couple of weeks to straighten out."

Peter smiled. "AKA early retirement."

Neal shook his head in disbelief. "But how did you find me?"

"For the third time?" Peter laughed. "When I set my sights on something, you know my aim is true."

Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on March 19th, 2012 01:33 am (UTC)
Title from the Elvis Costello song Alison.


Emma DeMarais
Andrea: Burke's Sevendizzydrea on March 19th, 2012 02:22 am (UTC)
Okay, now this is funny! Not the story; that's sweet and wonderful and hits just right.

No, what's funny is that I wrote something quite similar, albeit much longer. I guess great minds think alike, huh?

And for the record, fixing this had better be the top priority of Easton & Co. or I'm going to be very put out. In the meantime, this'll do. Thanks!
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on March 19th, 2012 02:49 am (UTC)
Oh, yeah! I've been meaning to write this 5:01PM business since I saw the finale. It just begged for it!
Andrea: Burke's Sevendizzydrea on March 19th, 2012 02:58 am (UTC)
Oh, I hadn't even thought about that! I was actually talking about Kramer's forced retirement. I went on the assumption that Neal wouldn't be pardoned (because there goes the premise of the show if he is). Forcing Kramer into retirement would solve at least part of the problem. It's just funny that you went there, too.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on March 19th, 2012 04:09 am (UTC)
Ah, I see!

Well, I think even if Neal gets released he'll still stay and work with Peter, though they'll be able to go more places! /wants to imagine Peter and Neal in tuxes on an art retrieval mission in Monaco/
a rearranger of the proverbial bookshelf: White Collar - El & Peterembroiderama on March 19th, 2012 03:08 am (UTC)
I love it--what a perfect resolution.
Emma DeMaraisemmademarais on March 19th, 2012 04:10 am (UTC)
Thanks, hon! And nice to see you!
love_82 on March 19th, 2012 04:40 am (UTC)
This story is wonderful. I love your solution.
ladygray99: WC100ladygray99 on March 19th, 2012 02:39 pm (UTC)
I want this to be cannon in the worst way. Thank you. And thank you for the lovely flurry of fic this week.

rubynyerubynye on March 19th, 2012 06:03 pm (UTC)
*shrieks in delight*
Tiger Lily the Ginger Cattigerbright on March 25th, 2012 11:40 pm (UTC)
I love you.
The Gauche in the Machinechina_shop on April 3rd, 2012 09:53 am (UTC)
Yes, please! This is adorable!