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30 March 2014 @ 11:59 pm
Numb3rs Fic: Harsh Awakening  
Written for numb3rs100 Challenge #465 – Pulse

Title: Harsh Awakening
Pairing/Characters: Ian/Colby
Rating: PG13
Word Count: 100
Spoilers: Sniper Zero, Judgment Call
Summary: Colby finds himself gravely injured in the line of duty
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ

EMTs gurney lift "On three!"

Sirens horns traffic "We're losing him!"

Swerve rattle flatline "Clear!"

Jolt jolt jolt "No pulse!"

Lights hallway yelling "Trauma room 3!"

Injection pain fading "Stay with us!"

Warmth surrounds, no pain, no fear, no self...

Jolt harsh awakening "We've got a pulse!"

Mask breathe surrender "Get him into surgery!"

Waking to a hazy world, a hand that holds his own, his name whispered with reverent lips...

Smile feel kiss "Colby, don't you ever leave me."

Safe loved happy "Promise."

Eyes take in the sight of Ian hovering, gaze fraught with worry, filled with love unspoken...

Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on April 1st, 2014 07:09 am (UTC)
I confess this isn't one of my more successful experiments, but it's a drabble for this week. I may not be writing lots of good longer fic for the fandom, but I'm still here writing each week!


Emma DeMarais
melissima: Charlie' shy smile  <lj user=darkangel41melissima on April 1st, 2014 07:20 am (UTC)
I like your experiment! It has a cool rhythm, and through that it creates the disjointed, near-staccato feeling I've really had, flying through a hospital while people yell things over my head.

Would that we all had someone like Ian hovering too, waiting for us when we open our eyes.
lilacs_roseslilacs_roses on April 1st, 2014 02:54 pm (UTC)
Awesome as far as I'm concerned! So much in so few words... Totally loved it and agree with Mel.
Tamannaswingandswirl on April 1st, 2014 03:16 pm (UTC)
COLBY! /wibble/

This was wonderful, hon.

riverotter1951riverotter1951 on April 1st, 2014 07:01 pm (UTC)
So much said in so few words and the urgency as well.