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06 December 2006 @ 12:38 am
Numb3rs Fic: Slam  
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Title: Slam
Pairing/Characters: Don/Liz
Rating: NC17
Spoilers: Longshot, Blackout
Summary: Don and Liz go back to her place after a dinner engagement
Notes/Warnings: Read the disclaimer on my LJ


Don kicked the front door shut and slammed Liz up against the wall, grinding into her as he ravished her neck.

"Fuck me," she purred in his ear as she slid her arms under his shirt, raking his back with her long nails. "Right here..."

Spurred on by her sensual whisper, Don pushed her skirt up and found she was bare beneath it.

"Fuck..." he growled into her ear. He pulled back just enough to free his cock from his jeans, then slipped both hands under her ass, lifting her up and pressing her against the wall.

Liz wrapped her legs around him as he plowed into her with an abrupt thrust.

"Yes..." she gasped, wrapping her arms tightly around his neck as he pummeled her hard, the nearby telephone table rattling from the force of their actions.

"Wanted to fuck you so bad during dessert," Don rasped.

"Wanted to be dessert," Liz moaned, her tongue circling his ear.

Repositioning her, he shifted one of his hands so he could press a finger against her entrance. He felt a shiver go through her so he upped his efforts and slipped the tip of his finger inside her.

She shuddered and clenched around him, groaning wordlessly as she tensed in his arms.

He managed only a few more thrusts before the sensation overwhelmed him and he exploded inside her as the final throes echoed through her body.

He managed to keep her up, mostly by pressing his weight against her as he rested his head against the wall, panting hard.

Gingerly, she started to bring her legs down and he slipped out of her with a jolt, still sensitive.

"Mmm..." Her voice vibrated in the warmth of his neck as she laid her head against him. "Bedroom?" she asked, her voice suggestive.

"Round two?" he joshed.

"What can I say, I'm insatiable," she teased.

Don captured her mouth in a kiss, thrusting his tongue in forcefully to show he wasn't anywhere near done for the night either.

"I knew there was something I liked about you."

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Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 6th, 2006 08:41 am (UTC)
Confession
I confess this was initially going to be a slash fic.

Lately I've been bemoaning my inability to write straight up PWP. Seriously I write *pages* of setup and talking and backstory just so I can get two (or more /grins/) people to fuck. It's pathetic. Sure, most of the time I really enjoy that part of the fic and I like fic with plots and porn, but my concern was that when I *tried* to write it I kept finding that those pesky extra pages just kept on showing up unbidden.

So this was supposed to be my sex only PWP, only the idea of slamming someone against the wall and fucking them is more problematic logistically with slash than het. Still, I was willing to try and had one sentence written, but that was it.

Then someone asked about Don/Liz fic and I thought, well hell, I liked their chemistry and they have already indulged in Wall!Smut in canon, so why not? ;-)

So now Slam is het Don/Liz. It's not that hot, IMHO, but at least it's all about the sex and not a ton of angsty *discussion*. Hehehe

So thank you to that person who asked about Don/Liz. (It's too late at night to get your permission to say who you are, but feel free to post a comment if you're cool with it being known.) That suggestion was just what I needed to get this fic off my partial list and onto LJ. :-)

Thanks,

Emma DeMarais
A Special Kind Of Crazy: FBI Porn by meangelskuuipo on December 6th, 2006 06:36 pm (UTC)
Re: Confession
It's not that hot, IMHO...

::blinks:: Huh? This is way hot, even though I detest Liz.

Going with the whole fuck buddy scenario RM alluded to, I can totally see this happening.
Re: Confession - emmademarais on December 6th, 2006 09:30 pm (UTC) (Expand)
DarkElyelysium1996 on December 6th, 2006 01:54 pm (UTC)
ok some thoughts on this fic.

i totally could see Don being turned on by the fact that she wore no panties, love that line.

i can so see her telling him to F her... she's a little slutty but I liked that about her cause she just wants to have some fun with Don and go with it...... (but still don't like her character. *bemoans* why did they not develop her just a little bit more?)

gratuitous sex is always good. i mean that's what makes it fun. ;)

sometimes it's great to get right to the point...... which you did (yum)

good review? yeah i liked it.

ps so how does one get to be dessert for Don?
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 6th, 2006 09:42 pm (UTC)
*bemoans* why did they not develop her just a little bit more

Um, because there's not enough time in ~40 minutes to establish a crime, solve it, have gratuitous sex *and* get into backstory on a guest star's character?

If the audience (and TPTB) liked her enough she'll come back and get developed more, but for now she was acceptable eye candy for sweeps. Or rather since she got Don half naked, she *facilitated* eye candy for sweeps. Hehehe

ps so how does one get to be dessert for Don?

Write a Mary Sue. Just don't expect anyone to read it. ;-)

Thanks,

Emma
gyen_gaoltosing: Touchgyen_gaoltosing on December 6th, 2006 04:38 pm (UTC)
Wow! You can really whip up some good stuff in a hurry. (I envy you!) :D

Don pushed her skirt up and found she was bare beneath it.
"Fuck..." he growled into her ear.


Dude...I melted a bit at thought. Finding nude flesh where you weren't expecting it is HAWT.

"Wanted to fuck you so bad during dessert," Don rasped.
"Wanted to be dessert," Liz moaned, her tongue circling his ear.


*LOL* Very nice.

I know exactly what you mean about the idea for the scene already being in your brain but then inserting different characters. It can have a really interesting effect on the overall story.

Anywam, thank you so much for indulging me. :D This was *lurvely.*
gyen_gaoltosing: Garcia Laughinggyen_gaoltosing on December 6th, 2006 04:40 pm (UTC)
Sorry.
*LMAO*

Hey, how 'bout those typos, eh? I love the 'anywam' in the second to last sentence! XD Apparently, my coffee hasn't quite kicked in yet.
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irena_adler: Don flirtirena_adler on December 6th, 2006 05:30 pm (UTC)
I can definitely see Liz enjoying wall-slamming sex and Don enjoying doing it to her. :D She's gonna have bruises tomorrow to remember it by!
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 6th, 2006 09:44 pm (UTC)
Well, this is one thing we have canon on! How lucky am I that Wall!Smut is something we know Don and Liz are into? Hee!

Thanks,

Emma
andiadmiralandrea on December 6th, 2006 07:05 pm (UTC)
Not that hot? :is puzzled: More like it's smokin'! I haven't seen Liz, but I've seen the pix and yeah... :fans self: I don't even really like to read het any more, but I'm a Don!babe, so I went with it and was glad I did.

Which reminds me, I must find your Karen/Don/Robin and re-read...
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 6th, 2006 09:48 pm (UTC)
Not that hot? :is puzzled: More like it's smokin'!

Thank you. I'm glad you think it is. I think it's hard to turn yourself on with your own writing. It happens so infrequently for me I tend to doubt the level of hotness others might find in what I'm putting out. This didn't register on my meter, but I put it out anyway since it was done. I was at least happy I'd succeeded in writing a rare PWP for a change.

V is for Verdict (Karen/Don/Robin) is a nice one though. I should write more threesomes. I do have another pegging fic in the works (Megan/Colby this time) so at least I do sometimes try for variety. ;-)

Thanks,

Emma
Tya, lost and found: [n3] Hornytya_rc on December 6th, 2006 10:19 pm (UTC)
"I knew there was something I liked about you."

Eheh, we so know that it's the ONLY thing he likes about her!
Weird thing is that I like her, I genuinely like her. She was feral, and likeable. And HOT. Guuuh.

Anyway, this ficlet was v. v. v. hot and thanks for writing Don!het!sex, it was exactly what I needed :)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 7th, 2006 10:30 pm (UTC)
Feral... That's a good word for her. I like it. /makes note/

I may have a bad rep as a slash author, but I really do write plenty of het and gen. Really. And threesomes. And pegging. And BDSM. Shit... I've got a bad rep. Hehehe

Glad you enjoyed it. I'm enjoying your icon right now. ;-)

-Emma
(Anonymous) on December 7th, 2006 01:15 am (UTC)
*Crawls back up into my chair* Hi .. :)

That was a really good fic. My friends and I have always said that if anyone in the show was good for wall!slamming it was Don. He's the fierce one you go to for just a night of "breaking furniture," and Charlie is the one you go to if you want to be cuddled after making love. ;)

Very good fic. *Fans self* I'm gonna go sit in the freezer for a while ;) Thanks, luv - I needed that.
nigelsnymphet on December 7th, 2006 01:16 am (UTC)
Ugh, lousy LJ. The chair-crawler was me. I forgot I wasn't signed in. Err. Anyway, loved the fic - going to sit in the freezer now, lol. ;)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 7th, 2006 10:38 pm (UTC)
I hate that about LJ - it not being totally glaringly obvious you're not logged in. /kicks LJ/

I'm glad you thought it was hot and I'm with you on the whole Don!Wall!Smut! thing. (Have you seen that challenge? Plenty of Wall!Smut to be had at wallsmut.)

You know when I read 'breaking furniture' you reminded me I have a Don/Ian fic like that. It was fun to tear up the place before fucking. I'll have to do that again sometime. ;-)

Thanks for reading and commenting!

-Emma
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perhaps some frottage is in ordersororcula on December 11th, 2006 10:01 am (UTC)
So, I was going to friend you anyway, but since Don/Liz is my not-so-secret favorite new pairing? *pounds away at "friend" button* (OMG, I didn't mean for that to sound so dirty!)

I love slash, but it's really nice to read some het every now and then, and sometimes it can be hard to find in this fandom.

He managed to keep her up, mostly by pressing his weight against her as he rested his head against the wall, panting hard.

My favorite line. I love this image. :-)
Emma DeMarais: BlueEyeemmademarais on December 13th, 2006 01:58 am (UTC)
LOL! Funny...

I'm glad you like Don/Liz and I'm all for slash, cest *and* het as well as gen. I think I kind of have a rep as as slash author, but honestly I write it all. LJ is pretty slashy though, so if you want a lot of het it's more likely you'll find it on one of the non-LJ fic archives. I'm looking forward to more Don/Liz and my bet is we'll get it in spring, maybe even for sweeps. :-)
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